Hi faridah this is me Javana i hope your having a good time in room 17 and i liked how you drew a picture of you dancing on stage. Also you need to make paragraphs im not just saying that to be mean to you im actually just saying it you only did one sentence and only 2 lines you have to write a lot more words. And put full stops and capital letters after the full stops i hope you have a good time at school.
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Hi faridah this is me Javana i hope your having a good time in room 17
and i liked how you drew a picture of you dancing on stage. Also you need to make paragraphs im not just saying that to be mean to you im actually just saying it you only did one sentence and only 2 lines you have to write a lot more words. And put full stops and capital letters after the full stops i hope you have a good time at school.
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